journal?

this is a short story where i had an hours rest and nothing better to do
i was in school, sitting alone there on that indoor stage looking out,
there was no one around... i tot of writing this~
but when i was about to wrap up my story, some dude came by and distracted me...
so the mood ran away and i couldnt finish it up.
CONGRATZ KHAI YONG! =P

````Mandy is sitting alone in the back yard of her house. Sweet scented flowers filled the air as the wind blew. Looking at her, Goldie, her pet dog wondering what her owner is thinking of. Mandy has just gotten a call from her father, telling her that her grandmother passed away moments ago. Mandy is devastated but yet, tears couldnt fill her eyes. Mandy didnt know how to react.
````Mandy's grandmother, is a loving person. She was always by her side when Mandy felt insecure. The one who always gave advices and an overflow supply of support towards Mandy. All she ever needed was Mandy's smile to make her feel satisfied.
````It wasnt easy for Mandy as she grew up. Having a mother who passed away just after three years living in the world is never a pleasing matter. Occasionally being teased and pushed over by her friends, Mandy cries herself to sleep almost every night. Her father wasnt always around to be with her to listen to her problems or even to spend a little time with her. Mandy was lonely. Mandy was sad. Mandy never knew what to do.
````Once her dad was admitted into the hospital because he got injured in an accident. Mandy had to live with her grandmother until he had recovered. Mandy was only 8 then. This was when she knew that she could depend on someone for protection. Her grandmother would try many ways to make Mandy talk about her feelings and what she was thinking. Her grandmother had became Mandy's best friend.
````Even after Mandy's father was fully recovered, Mandy insisted and continued staying with her grandmother. Then, Mandy would always get to talk to someone and continue being happy. And her grandmother too was happy to her her granddaughter with her as her companion.
````As years go by, the happy Mandy aced most of her examinations and was doing well in her school. Nobody dared to tease her anymore and instead they listened to her for she was a role model to among her peers. Even with so much going on, she still goes home and tell her storied to her grandmother.
````Then one day, 18 year old Mandy was accepted into Harvard University, a prestigious university it is. Mandy was thrilled but was also worried as she knew she had to leave her grandmother. Her grandmother reassured her that she will be fine without Mandy and that Mandy should go on and further her studies because this chance wasnt easy to achieve. After thinking for a long time, Mandy decided to go for it and promised to contact her grandmother as often as possible.
````After about three months since Mandy left, the unimaginable happened. Her grandmother suddenly passed away. Mandy couldnt make it back in time to see her grandmother for the one last time before she left the world.
````Tears were slowly flooding her eyes. Mandy knew now she had lost another person who she had loves the most. Goldie was heard whining, looking at her teary owner. Then Mandy asked Goldie in tears, " What do i do now? "

huha!
it's short
and i gave three ppl read it and they rate 6.5 to 7 out of 10.
it is still bad
natasha said if i wrote it longer it would be nicer
anyhow... one hour wasnt enough to write a super long story =(
plus the mood has to be there!!! XDD

falalalala
nobody reads this...
i'm posting it for the sake of posting
BLEAH!
pls rate if u do read this ^^